100 дней языка: день 78

Практикуйте написание коротких текстов на любом изучаемом языке на заданную тему.

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Ветка для ваших работ по теме 78-го дня.
Правила челенджа «100 дней языка»Показать
Цель челенджа

Цель челенджа - привить привычку использовать язык каждый день, перебороть страх. Главное - постоянство!

Суть идеи кратко

100 дней практикуем написание коротенького текста на изучаемом языке на заданную тему

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  • Главное правило - писать на изучаемом языке КАЖДЫЙ ДЕНЬ 100 дней подряд, пусть даже совсем немного.
  • Участвовать можно всем, с любым уровнем языка.
  • Писать можно на любом изучаемом вами языке. Если их несколько, можете писать на нескольких.
  • Если ваш язык не английский, то в самом начале своего поста указывать тег #названиеязыкамаленькимибукваминарусском, например, для итальянского #итальянский.
    Сам текст начинать с новой строки.
  • Если вы по каким-либо причинам опоздали на начало челенджа, вы можете спокойно присоединиться к текущим темам. Пропущенные темы вы сможете наверстать после окончания челенджа. Как? Пока не решила. Посмотрим в процессе.
  • ТЕКСТЫ МОГУТ БЫТЬ ДАЖЕ ДЛИНОЙ В 2 ПРЕДЛОЖЕНИЯ, если пока ваш уровень или другие обстоятельства не позволяют писать больше. Если вы можете писать больше - отлично!
  • Каждое воскресенье в 8:00 МСК в этой ветке форума 100 дней языка (100 дней языка) мной будет вывешиваться список тем на следующую неделю. Список будет содержать темы на всю неделю, каждый пункт списка соответствует одному дню.
  • Список тем будет на русском языке. Вы должны будете перевести вопрос на свой язык самостоятельно.
  • Вы можете предлагать свои темы в этой ветке форума 100 дней языка (100 дней языка). Возможно, мы сможем использовать самые интересные из них в будущем.
  • Каждый день в 8:00 МСК будет появляться новая тема в разделе «Practice Your English”, которая будет называться «100 дней языка: день 1» и т.д. для размещения ваших работ.
  • В каждой ветке дня челенджа темы недели будут для вашего удобства продублированы в первом посте.
  • Если вы по каким-либо причинам не успели написать заданную тему в срок, у вас будет 3 дня, чтобы наверстать упущенное. На четвёртый день в 8:00 МСК тема будет закрыта и вы не сможете ничего в ней добавить.
  • Чтобы чьи-то идеи и тексты, которые успели выложить раньше вас в теме, не мешали вам писать, вы можете сделать это где-то в другом месте в электронном виде, а потом просто скопировать их в нужную тему.
  • По желанию вы можете разместить под спойлер полезную информацию для других: например, список слов и выражений по теме, советы по написанию и т.д. Представляете, если каждый напишет что-то полезное по теме, сколько всего полезного будет доступно для всех! Так мы сможем помогать друг другу!
  • Поскольку 100 дней это на 2 дня больше 14-ти недель, для порядка эти два дня будут прикреплены к первой неделе. Поэтому начали мы в субботу 10.03.2018 года.
  • Преподаватели, а также участники форума с хорошими знаниями языка могут комментировать тексты и помогать исправлять ошибки. При этом необходимо использовать цитирование сообщения участника челенджа для удобства. Просьба делать это вежливо, не оскорбляя чувства участника челенджа.
  • Челендж начался 10.03.2018 года и продлится ровно 100 дней до 17.06.2018 года включительно. Это 14 недель и 2 дня ✊
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Ещё раз напоминаю, что в челендже можно участвовать с любыми языками.

Не забудьте, что тема будет закрыта во вторник 29.05.2018 года в 8:00 МСК. Поэтому не затягивайте с выполнением задания. Смысл челенджа как раз в том, чтобы не прокрастинировать и начать делать хотя бы немного!

Одним из активных участников челенджа была предложена идея рефлексировать над своими ошибками, анализировать их, что очень полезно для недопущения их в будущем. Это вы можете делать в специальном файле здесь

Кроме этого, на втором листе этого файла вы можете вести словарик понравившихся слов и выражений по теме.

Удачи!
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Сообщение Syaochka aka JuliaKu »

Have you ever planned a big event, a party, a holiday?

Oh, yes! Actually, I like planning, although I'm not so good at making anything.

When my children were very young, I was obsessed with the idea of making every their birthday perfect. And I had been planning the Pirate Birthday Party for my older son Max for nearly four months. I'd bought some black material and had made pirate flags and bandanas. I'd painted a huge pirate ship on the wall. I had asked my husband to make a wooden wheel of the ship, and we had made the pirate ship out of our children's two-story bed. I had planned the whole menu and I had learned how to bake a biscuit cake. I had made up a gorgeous cake in the shape of a pirate ship with sails, a chocolate wheel and chocolate figures of pirates and sharks.

I had written a whole screenplay of the birthday party. It included a treasure hunt and several activities and games. I had made a pirate map for this treasure hunt. Everything was planned just excellent!
Finally, I had printed invitation cards and sent them to all our guests by post (a real post, not e-mail).

And... the week before the party my younger son Andrew felt sick badly. He'd got an intestinal infection. I called off the Party as he was very contagious. We had been staying in a hospital for two days and came back home.

OK, no party, no guests. On the day of Max's birthday I baked two delicious pirate cakes. But soon Andy became sick again. So we hadn't had even a family party. We rushed to another hospital for another week. Andy was only one year old, and this infection nearly killed him.

But everything ended well, Andy recovered. And my children had many great birthday parties, which weren't planned so perfect.
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Have you ever planned the big event?

Actually no. I have never planned anything bigger my dougher birthday. I am far from the entertainment industry and not sociable by myself. The biggest event I have ever prepared is the birthday my little daughter who celebrated it in a children cafe with her classmates. It was the first birthday during the school years and we invited her classmates to the cafe and invited an entertainment team and prepared different games. But it was not a huge party because only five guests were there. But it seemed to us heavy to manage it and there were a lot of little issues.

As for our family, we have even not performed a wedding party because we don't like to engage in large, loud parties.
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Сообщение Over_the_cuckoosnest »

Do you like planning?

I love planning, bit actually I can say that I prefer to plan things rather to do them. Usually I make a list of to-do things in the morning while drinking coffee. And during the day I look into it several times. I always want to do more than I am able to and unfortunately (or maybe fortunately) in the evening I cannot cross out all points from my list. Sometimes it disappoints me but more often I take philosophical approach: I always have thing to do and never bored.
Once a year or maybe more often I make general plans concerning future: education, holidays, life goals and other. Slowly but steadily I approach my goals.
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Have you ever organised a big event, a party or a celebration?

No, I haven't. And I can't decide right now is it for better or for worse. On the one hand I'm a bit afraid of organising such thing as I've never done that and I have no idea how to do it. However we all find ourselves in the situations when we doing something for the first time, and the majority of these times we ultimately go through learning something new. On the other hand I'm sure that organising a big event is a golden opportunity due to the experience you can gain from it. Managing a lot of people and activities to get a positive outcome is something worth trying to do.
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Сообщение nbulba »

#испанский

¿Has organizado alguna vez el evento, la fiesta o la celebración?

No, nunca. Y no puedo decir si es bien o mal para mi. Por una parte lo me da un poco miedo de organizar tanta cosa bastante grande y responsable. Además no tengo ni idea de como organizarlo. Pero todos nosotros siempre hacemos algo por primera vez, y en la mayoria de las tenemos éxito. Por otra parte estoy seguro que organizar algo grande como un evento es muy buena oportunidad porque es posible ganar buena experiencia. Dirigir mucha gente y mucha actividades y hacerlo bien vale la pena intentarlo.
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Have you ever organized any big event?
I have had some experience in organizing events such as my relative’s birthdays. It’s not such difficult nowadays. The most troublesome thing is to choose the right place with good serves, make a menu and tell the guests about event. You event will have a success if you invite professional animators and photographer. So, all these staff will take care about your event you just have to pay for it.
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Have you ever planned a big event or a party?

I have planned only family parties and can’t imagine how to organize a big one. Planning a party for my family is quite simple for me because I know their preferences for food and entertainments. It’s interesting to search some information for the fest, to decorate room. But I may be ashamed to make a big party or event for unknown people.
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Have you ever planned any big party?
Once when I was a student, I decided to organise a party for the whole group of mine. Of course I didn’t want to pay for everybody and moreover I wanted that everybody contributed to buying snacks and drinks. In the end I failed and I didn’t organise anything. Later I had some small parties at home which could involve up to 15+ people, but most part of preparation was taken by my parents. At least my mom prepared a lot of food and what I had to do is to invite people to visit me. Therefore, I must say that I haven’t organised any big party ever in my life. On the other hand, what is a big party? For some people a party for 5 people could be big enough. A wedding party could consist of a very small number of people like four to ten. So it is difficult to say. Moreover, some parties are organised spontaneously and don’t demand big preparation even it they involve a decent number of people.
I think I wrote down enough words and can stop at this without digging into details.
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Syaochka aka JuliaKu пишет: 27 май 2018, 20:14 Have you ever planned a big event, like, a party or a holiday?

Oh, yes! Actually, I like planning, although I'm not so good at making anything/(?)not so good at it (?). When my children were very young, I was obsessed with the idea of making every their birthday of theirs perfect/unforgettable.

Далее вообще бы весь паст перф в повествовании заменила бы на паст НЕ перфект (череда событий, когда что чему предшествовало и так достаточно ясно).
And Once I had been planninged the Pirate Birthday Party for my older son Max for nearly four months/Once it took me nearly four months to plan .... I'd bought some black material/fabric/cloth and had made/to make pirate flags and bandannas. I'd even painted a huge pirate ship on the wall! I had asked my husband to make a wooden steering wheel of for the ship, and we had made the pirate ship out of our children's two-storу(AmE)/storey (BrE)//bunk bed.{Может, переставить местами: сначала корабль, потом корабельный штурвал?} I had planned the whole menu and I had learned how to bake a biscuit cake. I had made up a gorgeous cake in the shape of a pirate ship with sails, a chocolate wheel and chocolate figures of pirates and sharks. I had written wrote a the whole screenplay of the birthday party. It included a treasure hunt and several activities and games/It included several different games and activities, a treasure hunt among them. I had made/I drew a pirate map for this treasure hunt. Everything was planned just excellently/perfectly planned!
Finally, I had printed the invitation cards and sent them to all our guests by post (a the real post, not (by) e-mail/by snail-mail, not e-mail).
And...just in the/a (= one) week before the party my younger son Andrew felt/got sick (AmE)badly/fell seriously (badly) ill (BrE). He had/got an intestinal infection. I called off/had to call off the Party as he was very contagious. We had been stayinged/We had to stay in a (the - AmE) hospital for two days (and came back home).
OK, no party, no guests. On the day of Max'(s) birthday I baked two delicious pirate cakes. But soon Andy became sick again. So we hadn't had didn't even have a family party. We rushed to another hospital and stayed there for another week. Andy was only one year old then/that time, and this infection nearly killed him/was a close shave.

But everything ended well, and Andy recovered. And my children have had/ had many great birthday parties (since then), which weren't so perfectly planned/ , though I didn't put that much effort into planning them.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Treasure_hunt_(game)
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Have you ever organised a big event?
No, I haven't. I did my best to avoid any organising. Last time when my friends and I were going to the seaside with tents, I took part in preparations, but my role was minor. I realise how difficult it is to organise a big event. My company of about 500 people in staff organises New Year corporate annually. Actually, all the preparations are usually made by only one person, so she starts planning in September in order to be ready by December. This arduous task requires a lot of concentration and effort. Personally, the possibility of organising my own wedding scares me very much. Maybe that is why I don't want to jump into any relations.
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jujik2064 пишет: 29 май 2018, 11:18 Have you ever organized a(ny) big event?
I have had some experience in organizing such events such as my relatives’ birthdays parties. It’s not such so/very difficult nowadays/these days.
The most troublesome thing/What can cause you trouble is having to choose/is choosing the right place with good serves service, make(?) plan/planning a menu and tell/telling/inform/informing the guests about the event/invite/inviting the guests.
You The event will have be a success if you invite/hire/get professional animators and a photographer. So, all these the staff you hired will take (professional) care of about your the event and you('ll) just have to pay for it.
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Primula пишет: 29 май 2018, 19:08 Have you ever planned a big event or a party?

I have planned only our family parties/and gatherings and can’t imagine/have no idea how to organize a big one/anything bigger. Planning a party for my family is quite simpleeasy/not very difficult/is no big deal/ for me because I know their preferences for food and entertainments. It’s interesting to search for/to look for some information /something new and unusual for the fest, and decorate the room/house/table. But I may might/would probably be ashamed confused if I had to make a big party or an event for unknown people I don't know well.
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nbulba пишет: 29 май 2018, 06:18 Have you ever organised a big event, a party or a celebration?

No, I haven't. And I can't decide right now if it is for better or for worse/Now that you ask me, I start thinking that, perhaps, I should give it a try/I should try it one day. On the one hand I'm a bit afraid of organising such thing as I've never done that and I have no idea how to do it.
- а давайте попробуем поставить подчеркнутое сразу после "No, I haven't"?
Начинаем с начала:

No, I haven't because/as I'm a bit afraid of organising such thingS/a bit afraid of it as I've never done (that) it (before), and I have no idea how to do it. However, <comma> sometimes I think that, perhaps, I should give it a try/I should try it one day. From time to time, we all find ourselves in the a situation when we doing have to do something for the first time, and the majority of these times more often than not, we ultimately successfully/we manage to pull it through/go through it//we end up going through it and learning something new/having learnt something new in the process. On the other hand So, I'm sure that organising a big event is/can be/might be/must be a golden opportunity due to for you to gain the invaluable experience you can gain from it. Managing a lot of people and arranging various activities to get with a positive outcome)/it is something worth trying to do.
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maximus пишет: 28 май 2018, 07:30 Have you ever planned the a big event?

Actually, <comma> no. {поменяла порядок 2-го и 3-го предложений:}
I am so far from the entertainment industry even as a consumer, <comma> and I am not very sociable by myself either/and I'm not a party person myself at all. I have never planned anything bigger than my little dАughter'S birthday party. The (That is/was the biggest event I have ever prepared.) is the birthday my little daughter who She celebrated it in a children'S cafe with her classmates. It was the her first birthday during the school years after she went/started going to school, and we invited her classmates to the cafe, and invited hired an entertainment team and prepared different games (that is if you did it yourselves/...and hired an entertainment team to prepare different games (that is if they did it). But it was not a huge party because only five guests were there/there were just five guests invited. But Still, it seemed to us heavy to manage it really difficult to arrange, and there were a lot of little/minor issues to address.

As for our family, we have even not even performed held/organised a our own wedding party because we don't like to be engageD in large, loud festivities/we hate going to/attending/taking part in/being part of huge/noisy/crowded and noisy parties.
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QwestDay пишет: 01 июн 2018, 10:53 Have you ever organised a big event?

No, I haven't. I did usually do my best to avoid any organising/to avoid being involved in any kind of organising/to stay aside of any organising.

The Last time when my friends and I were going went camping to the seaside with tents, I took part in the preparations for the trip and it was the only time I have ever done it did it, but my role was minor.

I realise how difficult it is to organise a big event. My Our company with the staff of about 500 people in staff organise(s)/hold(s) a New Year corporate party annually for their/its employees every year. Actually, all the preparations are usually made by (only) one single person, so and she starts/has to start planning in September in order to be ready by December. This arduous/strenuous task requires a lot of concentration and effort.

Personally, the possibility (very) probability/the very thought of being involved into of organising of /the necessity to organise my own wedding scares me very much. Maybe that is one of the reasons why I don't want to jump into any serious relations.
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Have you ever orginized any big event?
Not of course, I don't even go to the big events like party, someone's birthday, school leaving parties.
Why do I have to orginize them? If I buy something poisoned or date expired foods, I will be guilty and badmouthed.
To be honest, I think that only vicious people like going to the party and nightclubs. They are all hard drinkers and needle freaks.

If somebody asked me to organize a big bacchanalian event, All of the things I am going to buy would be poisoned and date expired. Next day all of the guests would suffer from diarrhea.
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Johnwesleyhardin, it is not a requirement to drink at a party. Some people come together to drink, some - to sing songs or to prey.
I don't know why you decided that parties are organised only by those who want to use expired food or make people have loose stool. It is not necessary. You can have fun by playing games or talking of old times, or just greeting the bride and bridegroom.

I can agree though that it is in a Russian tradition to drink at big parties but now more parties are organised by abstainers, vegetarians or even religious people.

Sometimes parties are organised even without drink or food, just with water and fruits.

There are different kinds of parties in the world :)
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Michelangelo пишет: 07 июн 2018, 09:38 I don't know why you decided that parties are organised only by those who want to use expired food or make people have loose stool
No, I mean that if I buy expired food by chance during organization, almost all the people will accuse me of stealing money or doing it deliberately
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