Мне кажется, их слишком много в моих текстах. Скажите пожалуйста, не является ли это ошибкой и плохим стилем? С помощью каких приёмов можно разнообразить речь?
Я начал изучать английский язык не очень давно поэтому стараюсь пока использовать предложения с простейшей структурой.
Вот пример типичного текста, который я могу выдать:
Triatana lived in a monastery. She has a relative who want to take her out of a monastery. When he suggested it she agreed. After that she began to live in his house. Also a maidservant lived in his house.
Once relative sent a maidservant from home. Then he seduced Tristana. After that they often had sex.
Sometimes Tristana walked with the maidservant. Once she met a painter. She fell in love with him. Then they met often. The servant knew about their senses. But she didnt tell a relative about it. The painter invited Tristana to run away. She agreed. Then they did it.
When the relative has known about the escape he became very sad. After a few years Tristana returned. She was ill. A doctor amputated one of her legs. After that the painter left her. As you might guess the relative was very happy. From this moment Tristana became cynical. She married him. Then she killed him. Eventually she got heritage.